It is possible for Nalvyna to refuse you your letter of recommendation in the event that you made certain choices during her quest (such as opening sealed letters, withholding goods, etc). In this case you will need to complete House Hlaalu quests elsewhere in Morrowind before Dreynos Helvi will give you further work.
The following Journal ID and Index codes can be used with the Journalconsole command to manually update the quest to a certain point.
Jobs at the Docks (TR_m4_HH_AND_DocksQuests)
Index
Finishes Quest
Journal Entry
10
Dreynos Helvi asked me to find Nalvyna Balen at the port authority at the Andothren docks and do a couple of jobs for her. After she's satisfied and gives me a letter of recommendation, Dreynos Helvi can speak to me of more important business.
80
Having failed several of Nalvyna Balen's tasks, she refused to recommend me to Dreynos Helvi. I should tell him about my failure.
90
Being satisfied with the work I've done for her, Nalvyna Balen has now written a recommendation letter for Dreynos Helvi.
100
Finishes quest
I've given the recommendation letter to Dreynos Helvi. He'll be willing to give me more serious work, provided I've finished my business with Nalvyna.
110
Finishes quest
Dreynos Helvi was disappointed upon learning that Nalvyna Balen won't recommend me for further work. However, if I improve my reputation within House Hlaalu elsewhere, he might still have some business for me.
111
Finishes quest
Dreynos Helvi was disappointed upon learning that Nalvyna Balen won't recommend me for further work. However, since I've gained some reputation within House Hlaalu already, he still decided to offer me some business.